I found a photo of
a woman I have never seen before. The woman caught my interest right away,
because she looked somewhat like myself. This photo was buried my grandpa’s chest, so
it had to have some importance to him. She had light blonde hair with curls that
were down to her waist; her hair was the same strawberry blonde as mine. The
picture was taken when she played high school softball, because under the
playing year, which was 1992, it said “Lady Warriors” in big bold red letters. The
back of the photo was smudged, so at one point, there was more information that
could’ve told my nosey self more. I was confused because the bottom of the
picture looked like it had been torn where her name would be printed on the
photo. This sparked my interest even more. I needed to know whom she was, why
she was in my grandpa’s chest where he kept all of his old cards and letters
from the air force when he was deployed, and I wanted to know why she looked
like me. Was it an aunt that I never saw? I just needed to know who this woman
was.
I asked both of my
parents who she was, and they just looked at each other then back at me while
shrugging their shoulders saying, “We don’t know sweetie.”

“We should have
told her, I knew we should have. I knew Samantha would’ve eventually found out
about her someway. Mark, why didn’t we just tell her? We stress honesty, but we
haven’t been honest to our own daughter.. I’m an awful mother..”
“It’s okay Tina,
she wont know how to find her, we just couldn’t do it back then.. Our secret
will still be just our secret.”
More More More!!! lol That last part of the story makes me want to read more. The title of the story not only explains the woman in the picture but it also explains the entire piece. I get a sense of mystery and suspense from this story. I like it keep going.
ReplyDeleteI really like the story. Instead of writing "it sparked my interest" I think you could just describe it to make it flow more. The break is perfect and I agree with Shaniah, what's going to happen next??
ReplyDeleteIn the second line, instead of saying "she looked like myself", pick out a characteristic that you both have in common :) there are some statements that don't have to be stated directly! And like the other two, I want to know who she is! Tell us!
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