“Narnia”
In the blazing sun, I roller bladed around the entire neighborhood, all day
with my friends, with the present my uncle had gotten me the year before. In my
brother’s shorts and tee shirt, I raced home to my mom. With a ginormous smile,
she asked “Guess where you’re going next week?” She had enrolled me into summer
camp at the YMCA.
I woke up to the yellow/orange sun and
checkered shadows on my face, as my body screamed for more sleep. Like a sack
of potatoes, I sagged off my bed and crawled to the bathroom. Electrocuted with a burst of
energy, I brushed my teeth, washed my face, and put my clothes
on. Grabbing my packed brown bagged lunch, I clenched my teeth and walked
out the door. The minutes must have had melted away into seconds by the sun
because I was already in front of the YMCA. With my mom’s hand glued to mine,
butterflies and blushed skin, I held my head high and walked in. The rooms were
rainbows and the people were unicorns. My mouth dropped and my hand squeezed
even tighter.
Taking another fresh breath of air, I followed a
lady with a bright red shirt. I, too, was wearing a bright red shirt with many
others wearing a bright red shirt. Following this lady like little ducklings
out into the scorching sun, I sat on the wooden bench underneath a breezy tree
as its leaves fanned me. With eyes wide opened, a girl with braids ran over to
feel the gushing wind of the same tree, but it was not enough. Hunched over, I heard
a great roar as all the “animals” began running towards the sound. I grabbed my
friend’s hand and we headed to “Narnia,” a place in which the heat could be
defeated with many possibilities. At this place, the Blue Raspberry snowball
cured me and looking at my friend, she smiled and ordered, as I reached into my
pocket to pay.
12 years
later, we often visit Narnia because she still owes me 50 blue raspberry snow
cones.
The childlike voice is clearly highlighted in this piece. Is Narnia the camp or an imaginary place? You should make that more clear.
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